(Moving to Jack’s point of view now) Jack should have felt despondent, crushed, overwhelmed, but he didn’t. He felt alive, excited full of purpose and energy for the first time in his dull, short life. He had been ploughing in a barren field when they hacked the beanstalk down, but he wouldn’t let it stopContinue reading “23:147”
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23:146
Felicia didn’t know him well, the giant that fell through the clouds, but she’d witnessed his indulgence and laziness at maintaining balance. He carried too many trinkets and failed to monitor his weight. She didn’t see him slip from the sky but she heard the impact and witnessed the hushed anticipation, the bated breath ofContinue reading “23:146”
23:145
(A bit more. Also a bit later today, went for a run this morning and forgot to schedule a post. This is very early, rough draft). Felicia avoided personal details about herself but encouraged Jack to reveal everything. He was a loyal son but resented how trapped he was, tied to his mother due toContinue reading “23:145”
23:144
(And a bit more) Her lonely days were filled with anticipation, planning. Each letter she received opened her to experiences and visions she’d never imagined. Jack’s world was grounded, he talked of fields and days wandering the land. Even his grumbling over dull work sounded fascinating. She begged him to describe flowers, a luxury theyContinue reading “23:144”
23:143
(Not much today, and not great quality but I’ll polish it later). Dear Jack, I’m sorry about your father, mine lives but we don’t see each other much, and my mother died when I was a baby. No, we can’t eat clouds but we do eat birds. I can send some down if you like.Continue reading “23:143”
Update
Been having a very warm week here in the UK (well, warm for us) and my brain is a bit fried today. Instead of a poem I’ll give a little update. As well as the OutSpoken submission, I’m also hoping to apply for another over 30s pamphlet entry. Here’s the link if anyone else isContinue reading “Update”
23:142
(Jack and Beanstalk poem continued) Dear Sky Person, I’m Jack, a labourer’s son. I pass by your beanstalk everyday looking for work. What’s it like living in the clouds? Can you eat them? My family is poor since my father died and we live off others’ leftovers or any vegetables we can grow. Do youContinue reading “23:142”
23:141
(Another snippet from the Jack and the Beanstalk poem I’m working on) The beanstalks were grown to help with thinning oxygen. For survival. But they became a beacon, a temptation a change to everything. They began purely organic but pulleys were constructed and indulgence seeped into their world. Luscious fruits were small bursts of juicyContinue reading “23:141”
23:140
Hang me on a tree, dangle away my life and watch as my very self leaves my body, giving you an empty vessel you can pretend to mourn. Build a grave for what remains and waste time visiting, wishing, dreaming things had been different.
23:139
Waking to an air so thick breathing is a new challenge, conscious and hard. Rise to a day so warm and bright energy is sapped until a light breeze rejuvenates and reminds you of a new beginning for the one most dear to you. He’s been awake for hours due to heat and excitement, hisContinue reading “23:139”