23: 149

His quest became difficult here,

searching for magic beans,

finding the right kind of magic beans

(although he enjoyed the new experiences,

the high of such indulgence).

What little money he had disappeared

for his ‘research’, confusing his goal

for a time.

Withdrawal made him recall Felicia,

his mission, his future glory.

He began asking his new contacts

about different, faulty products,

never daring to mention giants

and beanstalks.

They mentioned an old woman,

half-starved, half-mad,

who offered magic beans

for farm animals.

No one was fool enough to trade.

Jack laughed with them

but left soon after,

eager to meet his destiny.

23:148

(Not much today, not much free time)

He waited and listened,

anticipation granting him patience

while hearing boastful recounts

of the beanstalk trade.

The nuggets of gold once envied

were cast aside, banned as currency

due to superstition.

Stories of how the beanstalk

first formed were whispered,

praying no such occurance

would ever happen again.

‘I saw it! Beans fell from the sky

and the next morning it was there,

fully grown. Magic beans.’

23:147

(Moving to Jack’s point of view now)

Jack should have felt despondent,

crushed, overwhelmed,

but he didn’t.

He felt alive, excited

full of purpose and energy

for the first time in his dull, short life.

He had been ploughing in a barren field

when they hacked the beanstalk down,

but he wouldn’t let it stop him.

More giants remained up there,

with his dearest Felicia

and riches of gold.

The greedy had profited from the trades,

barring those with nothing

and sneering at their misfortune.

He’d often been hired to help

load the goods onto the pulley,

using the opportunity to

sneak his letters up above.

No one paid attention to him,

but they would.

He would win love and riches

and everyone would admire his courage,

his charisma,

the very essence of Jack.

23:146

Felicia didn’t know him well,

the giant that fell through the clouds,

but she’d witnessed his indulgence

and laziness at maintaining balance.

He carried too many trinkets

and failed to monitor his weight.

She didn’t see him slip from the sky

but she heard the impact

and witnessed the hushed anticipation,

the bated breath

of those left above.

The basket trade stopped,

only one final letter came up.

Dear Felicia,

Giants? The sky people are giants? But how? And why are you up there with them? Did they kidnap you? Is that why you never see your father?

I understand now. I promise I’ll save you.

Love Jack.

She didn’t have the heart to reply.

And then the ground dwellers

cut the beanstalk down.

23:145

(A bit more. Also a bit later today, went for a run this morning and forgot to schedule a post. This is very early, rough draft).

Felicia avoided personal details

about herself but encouraged Jack

to reveal everything.

He was a loyal son but resented

how trapped he was, tied to his mother

due to poverty.

He dreamed of adventure,

of travelling,

of being important and brave

so people recognised and respected him.

He planned trips they could take,

describing lands merchants had told him about

and dreaming of a future together.

Felicia let him dream,

enraptured with his hope,

his unending resilience,

knowing it could never be.

But then, a month ago, it all changed.

The ground dwellers learnt of the giants.

23:144

(And a bit more)

Her lonely days were filled

with anticipation, planning.

Each letter she received opened her

to experiences and visions

she’d never imagined.

Jack’s world was grounded,

he talked of fields and

days wandering the land.

Even his grumbling over dull work

sounded fascinating.

She begged him to describe flowers,

a luxury they did not have.

He told her of land animals like cows,

big heavy creatures that provided

so much but took up room.

He drew pictures, wonderful windows

into a different world.

She plastered them all over her room,

gazing at them with both

amazement and a deep melancholy.

23:143

(Not much today, and not great quality but I’ll polish it later).

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry about your father, mine lives but we don’t see each other much, and my mother died when I was a baby.

No, we can’t eat clouds but we do eat birds. I can send some down if you like.

I’m not allowed to come down, I’ve heard it’s very green, is that true? And that you can move freely.

I would love a friend, it’s so lonely here. Please write again.

Yours hopefully,

Felicia.

Update

Been having a very warm week here in the UK (well, warm for us) and my brain is a bit fried today.

Instead of a poem I’ll give a little update. As well as the OutSpoken submission, I’m also hoping to apply for another over 30s pamphlet entry. Here’s the link if anyone else is interested:

COMPETITION NEWS: “And I’m Feelin’ Good – Six” – Over 30s First Collection Pamphlet Competition – Deadline: 31st August 2023

Meanwhile I’m still working on the Jack and the Beanstalk poem, and will write anything that inspires me in-between.

23:142

(Jack and Beanstalk poem continued)

Dear Sky Person,

I’m Jack, a labourer’s son. I pass by your beanstalk everyday looking for work. What’s it like living in the clouds? Can you eat them? My family is poor since my father died and we live off others’ leftovers or any vegetables we can grow.

Do you ever come down? No one wants to be my friend down here. Do you want a friend?

From Jack.

It was clumsy penmanship

with splotches on the page,

but she could feel the care

put into the words,

the hope felt to deliver it.

She knew she shouldn’t

but she decided to write back.

It was not an easy task;

she’d read his words with a magnifying glass.

She had to practice

over and over

to make her writing small enough.

It wasn’t to deceive,

she just wanted to make

a good impression.

23:141

(Another snippet from the Jack and the Beanstalk poem I’m working on)

The beanstalks were grown

to help with thinning oxygen.

For survival.

But they became a beacon,

a temptation

a change to everything.

They began purely organic

but pulleys were constructed

and indulgence seeped into their world.

Luscious fruits were small bursts

of juicy delight,

little trinkets were stored in pockets

and pulled out to admire.

They sent gold nuggets in exchange,

their only shiny marvel.

The letters began a year ago,

tiny doors into another life

Felicia had never imagined.

They sustained her,

gave her purpose.

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